Thinking of You

by FoundHim   Feb 10, 2006


Thinking of you
Is something I do
To forget whats around me
The noises and people
The hurt and depression
Im special in your eyes
Probably will till the day we die
Talking to you, being with you
Is a whole lot better
Than thinking of you is
Everyday, I wait till the time passes
But in between
Im thinking of you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Well done..i think this one could have been worded a little better though..you see since its in that form it tends to bring an upbeat. and your words are most likely meant to be slow, so if you put it in that form some word changes could be added and stuff to make it have a Perfect Flow
    But i still give it a 5 to the fact..its truthful. its powerful and its from your heart
    and thts a poem
    Great job
    5/5
    ~The Poet~

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