It was long, but it was so beautiful, especially lthe ending. keep using your feelings to enscribe these works of art!!!

This was a beautiful heartfelt write. Yes, it was a bit long, but necessary to tell the story. Job well done!

Wow yeah your right this is the longest poem..Wheww..that took a while
but tht was amazing..your now added to my fav's..and this poem is now my favorite..Great Job..
truly amazing
5/5
~TPOMH~

Aww That was so sad, But absoloutly adorable. I loved it to bits. Its definetly one of my favs now.
Keep up the great work, Bec xx

Thanx 4 the comment, The site i use for the writing is..
http://members.chello.nl/m.vandeven11/omvorm_unicode.html

Bec xx

This poem was beautiful, and sad. Most deff. 5/5!

Youre a great writer, keep writing!

Chelseyy

OMG i LOVE this poem it soo sweet n ture omg i luve this poem :D

OoooOoo I love it! It's such a beautiful story. 5/5!!

Wow... this is also really good. i like how its a story as well as a poem... nicole

Dis poem is really das, but beautifully written!

This was a awsome poem! no wonder it was published! wow wow! it was long but the flow kept it going! woow
5/5

Omg that poem was so beautiful! my eyes got watery! u r an awesome writer! that is AMAZING! i love it! my mouth was open the entire time! u kept ppl's attention going so well. dialogue in it too! WOW! i see y u got it published! u have a lot of talent!

LOVED IT! I can't even express how much I fricken loved this poem.

5/5

-Jenna.

This is a amazing poem..i had tears in my eyes when the girl died..its so bitter sweet..i love it..5/5..
Becca

Well congraduations, and it is long but it is a very good poem, love it, i give it a 5!!!!

“You know, I think you’re lying
Because you know I can tell
That looking through your eyes
You can see you’ve gone through hell.
stanza 12... i think it is supposed to be I can see you've gone through hell...

otherwise i think it is a wonderful poem. i think it would be cool to see pieces of the poem in other poems... like just her side.. then just his... instead of them mixed together... [example: follow the moonbeams part 1 and 2 of mine] this was an exelent read and once again made me cry... wow i am emotional tonight. great work darling

-/2 Terra

Wonderful poem! Really touching :)
5/5

Omg!!!!! i love it!!!!! i love it!!!!! great job!!!!! excellent poem!

Wow i loved it you are so good at this kind of stuff and thankyou for welcoming me in the disscusions i really like it here thnx agian and you are a really good writer

Jessyie

Wow. congrats on getting this in ur magazine thingy! thats way cool! and i can see why u did, it was perfect. lol i dont know what else to say:) 5/5

Oh jeez...i thought i already commented this one...

Umm...i dont even know what to say about this poem...im speechless...its like...my favorite poem i read today...oh wait...there was this othe...lmao jk

this poem is fkn amazing!

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