This is AMAZING!! no really..
i got goose bumps reading it.
something inside me turned.
i duno what it is ay but wow thats a good read.
im speachless really nice work
i'm addng you to my favourites. you are an awsum writter.
much love .xx
erica

OMG, I am so glad I got the chane to read this!!
Even though it was so long, it held my interest the whole way through and you managed to keep up a perfect flow all throughout this.
This is another favourite of mine.
You outdid yourself, you should be proud!

Long but AMAZING! This has to be my favorite now!! lol. Amazing. I'm speechless though. 5/5

6th COMMENT

wow... very long.. lol ... word choice was good... the flow was good but off in a couple of places ... it seems like you wanted to make a long poem.. and focused more on the length of it than the actual content... also the idea is cliche... not horrible but not my favorite

I`ve already commented on this one but it was a horrible comment lol so I decided to comment once again! I love, and always have loved, this piece. It is amazing and I can see why it would be in the magazine, it deserves so much more praise than I can give to it..sadly, I`m only allowed to vote to a 5 lol.

5.5
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heartchuu.