Even though it is your first time writing a love peom just like what you said, it is great! ^_^ i give your poem a 5!!! i can really relate with you..keep it up!

I really like this poem, mainly because I can REALLY relate. seems like whatever you went through (assuming lol) was similar to what I have been too. well, I hope to see more from ya! and thank you for the comment b.t..w. ^_^

What a heart touching poem, i relate to this, keep up the good work 5/5