Dark to me now

by ShadowDancer   Feb 10, 2006


No more do the stars brightly glimmer
Happiness in my life I will no more allow
No more do streams under moonlight glitter
No more to me does the wide sea shimmer
To me the sun itself is dimmer
For all is dark to me now

Since the day the life flew out of thee
Only weeks after we had made our vow
All thoughts of life deserted me
Life itself lost all meaning to me
The joys in this world I no longer can see
For all is dark to me now

Each day as I sorrowfully waken
Wishing I was with you somehow
For by God you have been taken
I am left desolate, alone and forsaken
My faith has been so surely shaken
For all is dark to me now

Now my body lies broken
Forever is it dark for me now
For my heart it has been broken
For my soul it has been broken
So desperate steps I have taken
With you forever I will be now

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  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    I love this poem, strong and flowing. I love the way it reminds me of Ye Old Style Speech :p. It's also amazingly written in that the reader can truly feel the pain and despair coming alive for them. Great Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Stunning, Just stunningly amazing. I loved it. I actually enjoyed every poem I've read so far. So that's is really good. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Hey, really loved the rhyme sceme here.. great work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    This is the first poem that somebody asked me to read from that thread that I actually thought was unique enough and strong enough to carry a message throughout the entire poem. It was enough to keep a reader's attention and draw them in from the start. It flowed really well. I really am amazed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    As I said I did print it out and have read it a millions time over and over.
    Im still not sick of it!
    love
    ~Em

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