by you come in this world alone in you leav alone Feb 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tha telephone rings n tha girl picks up n she says hey baby whats up |
You're poems are awesome! you're a fantastic writer.. good job 5/5 |
Great job. That was a really great poem even though it was quite sad also. I understand it cuz at my school we had like 4 suicides during my time there and those were some of the people you would never expect to do something like that becuz they seemed jus fine. Well keep doin what you do |
Damn thats hella sad girl why you write somethin like that? well holla lata aiight peace |
by Tite
Yo sometin like dis happen befoe to 1 of my homeboys. 3 of my homies got murdered and he put a rope round his nek b/c of it. It waz sad but stupid. Dere waz no reason he shouldve done dat. NE way u write poemz I can relate 2. I like dat. Keep up da good work. |
by Amanda
Wonderful poem...sad but it's a reality; people committ suicide a lot & it's truly sad...It's an amazing poem...I like how you used silence on the phone as a symbol of his life...Def. 5/5! |