by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX Feb 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You tell me the way i feel isn't real its all make believe. |
by Alexander
It is a good piece of work. There are a few places were you left out words and the flow is a bit choppy but i still liked it. With a little bit of work you could go far. 3/5 |
Vey nice.. 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this very much. |