The Deepest Test

by RadianceInReverse   Feb 10, 2006


This day of thought
and night of rest
I cut myself
and that was the deepest test
to see the wound
it makes me cry
to think that I crushed enough
to see my own blood gush

It didn't solve a thing
Because I still feel this perpetual pain

This poem is kinda short..but I wrote how I felt at the time...Please Comment..Joc

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yes its short and to the point which is great. but is this a true story?

    Did you cut yourself and if i my ask why?
    Not asking in a mean way just wanted to know what might drive a person to attempt it.
    But great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Good one

  • 18 years ago

    by Ella

    This is deeeeeeeeeeeeep in every way (because you aren't shallow) i love you joc