Except for the "girl"..i agree to all the pain..:o)
hey, that was very nicely written.
very unique..spl the undergiven stanza

Colourful nightmares
In black and white dreams
Nothing is ever
What it seems
You see her today,
You'll see her tomorrow.
But never will you see
The darkness of sorrow

well, take care and all the best
5/5

That's good. Sorry i don't know what to put for a title.
-Vino

That girl was me once upon a time. This is incredible, Steph. Amazing job done writing this.

I really really enjoyed this poem. Loved the black-and-white and just all of it! Great write, way to go!

Definitely a good poem, the blending of colour was fantastic. Brought out emotions, and painted a really vivid image. Awesome!

I really enjoyed this one also, I like the way the words just flow after another. The ending really surprised me, I thought it would predictably reflect on yourself yet you turn it around and pin it on us. I also thought the rhyming was excellent and didn't sound forced at all. Good job.

Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Wow that is really true. Looks like I found yet another person to be jealous of when it comes to writing. :)