Changes Forever

by dollwithafrown   Feb 10, 2006


The cold shivers run down my spine
The air turns chilled as I hear your voice
Icy and cold, a devil in the dark
Speaking your cruel words of anger

Your silent steps appear before me
The souls of your feet scraping the ground
Eyes of yours leaning heavily on my face
I can't bear to look at you anymore

A different person from the boy I once knew
Still a wonder to the world of what happened
I guess that's what happens though
Something changes and you can never get it back

That's what happened to you...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Nice one there... you're good at describing everything... through your words i was able to feel the emotions you put in it... good write! keep it up!

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was quite sad hun. The flow was pretty good but could be improved, the descriptions were good too but maybe needed a little more detail. Overall nice job 4/5, keep it up sweetie.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Aww..this was deeply written..its very true in many situations..nice flow..very nice:)5/5 for sure

  • 17 years ago

    by kelS;

    Wow.
    its so good.
    i loved this poem. theres nothing i can say thats wrong with it.
    amAZing.
    5/5.

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