Absolutely fantastic, as usual! you'll need to tell me how you do it, you're great at it

Wow, I love this poem, good job :) keep up the good work hon

Wonderful poem here hun. Very sad poem but perfectly written. You've got talent, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, great emotion. Kind of short, would of liked to see it a little longer.

Also this line in the first stanza,

"The air is turns chilled as I hear your voice"

You should change to

The air it turns chilled as I hear your voice

or

The air turns chilled as I hear your voice

or

The air turned chilled as I hear your voice

Other than that, wonderful Job!!!

Peace, Joe

Wow... i can relate to this SO much, cause i've been put through hell this past week b/c the love of my life has changed and i feel liek i'll never have HIM back. so, its dfefinitely my favorite i've read in a long while cause its so much like me. 5/5

Another great one

What a good yet sad poem. I understand. My ex was a big sweetie in the beginning. Then turned out to be a huge jerk.

I can relate to this poem very much. I know the exact feeling you are talking about. You expressed this very well. Great job!

I loved this!
It was so raw and real, full of emotion, also something I can relate to.
I liked the wording very much.

Amazing.. your an amazing writer, im gonna add you to my faves.. ill keep reading if youi keep writing!!!!

`Lauren

Wow.
its so good.
i loved this poem. theres nothing i can say thats wrong with it.
amAZing.
5/5.

Aww..this was deeply written..its very true in many situations..nice flow..very nice:)5/5 for sure

Awh, that was quite sad hun. The flow was pretty good but could be improved, the descriptions were good too but maybe needed a little more detail. Overall nice job 4/5, keep it up sweetie.

Nice one there... you're good at describing everything... through your words i was able to feel the emotions you put in it... good write! keep it up!

~angel~

Great poem. keep up the good work. 5/5