I liked the poem and the way it came across. It shows that you don't have to have a poem that ryhmes to make it a great poem.

Five/Five

P.S. thanks for the comment on my poem, i always try to return the favor.

Great poem...but not one of your best...you didnt use your mastery of words in this one as much as you do in a few of your other poems. Most of your poems are really good...it sux it takes you a while to submit new ones...but i kinda understand...

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Wow...
you are extremely talented. i'm just speechless...i wish i had more to say.
but it's just. amazing.
ahh...and thank you very much for the comment. i appreciate it greatly.
5/5
Lauren