by shannon Feb 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
"I think it is a surprise baby shower, |
by Kaylee
Touching poem, really don't know what else to say except yu might want to read over and fix those minor spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it's sad and hooks the reader and doesn't let go until the equally sad ending. |
by newlun
Great poem keep it up |
by Dawn Manna
Wow this is really good. please keep writing, you have a god sent gift |
by haley
Wow very touching poem. very understandable too. im sorry about your losses. if you get achance please reaed some of mine andlemmeknow |
Fantastically written, great flow and the rhyming seems very natural. |