Angel Dreams

by Krysten   Feb 10, 2006


For years she was alone
and none heard her scream
then one day it happened
it felt just like a dream

she placed the razor to her skin
it made a bloody line
and from that day onward
everything seemed fine

but those scars were cries for help
that none seemed to hear
so she continued to bleed
crying crimson tears

then one day something changed someone heard her scream
fast she was whisked away
it felt just like a dream

the person had been watching
waiting all along
searching for a time
to make right of wrong

she took the girl into her arms
and then into her heart
she promised she would love her
and that nothing would tear them apart

the little girl is happy now
knowing she is loved
her new mom is an angel
sent to her from above

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I got to say I love sytle as a poet and you are very good. This poem was powerful and meaningful and sweet all at the same time. I would like to add you to my favorite if that's cool [I always ask the writer before I actually add as a courtesy]

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written and expressed.

    is the line "then one day something changed someone heard her scream" ment to be 2 lines though, as in:
    "then one day something changed
    someone heard her scream"

  • 18 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    Aww this is so sweet!I love it so much,it sounds like a situation I am in now....I love my camp mom,I wish I could be with her 4-ever....Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very good poem, so touching and emotion. I understand the pain that is written within this poem, You can see by just reading my poems, But way way keep up the good work and be strong.

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by alixendra

    I luff this poem to like i luff most of your others to it says alot

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