That was really true. I loved it. keep up the awesome work!!!

Really good. all of ur poems are good

Great work. You caught the emotions of how people see others...."out casts" I guess you could call them. Great work I liked it alot.
~Juls~

Wow,
Very impressive!
Gave me goosebumps!!

Keep it up!

...Jen

I loved it. i was so powerful. i had a different flow about it. but it was really good i enjoyed reading it.
Emma 5/5

Wow...This is unbelieveably wonderfull! 14 YEARS OLD?! You are very articulate for your age. Wonderful poem.

Wow...This is unbelieveably wonderfull! 14 YEARS OLD?! You are very articulate for your age. Wonderful poem.

You took a comment theme of roses and thorns while putting your own powerful twist to it. I have been continually amazed by your poetry and the way you write. I just love it! Wow, you have talent hunni, a kind I haven't seem before.

-Tainted Mikochan

Lovely work ! good write
5/5
love
amy