Watch with your own eyes

by Watchmeburn   Feb 10, 2006


Its funny and I laughed,
Only a small contemptuous snicker within,
When I gave you back what I knew was yours,
A taste of your own medicine.

You don't see what I see inside me,
I will act it out soon,
Ill burn and tear you slowly,
And fall asleep to your dying tune.

The nails I put in you,
Watch with your own eyes,
Piercing flesh, your thick skin,
Your blood choking your cries.

These scars on my arms,
My stomach my back and legs too,
No f**cking emo sh*t,
Its real, I practice for you.

Ill rip it out myself,
Your black smoking heart will decay,
Have a bite, have a taste,
Your mouth is a grey ashtray.

Can I have your attention now?
Listen and shut your open wound,
Your mouth still moves
Ill stitch it closed soon.

This one is sh*t. I'm sh*t at writing, but I wanted to put this one up. Its about an *sshole I know, and if you couldn't tell,no, I dont like him.

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  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    I like how it was written, very dark and yet a great write. I love how you put together all your words. Keep writing.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This was really dark, a lot of anger coming across in this poem. Well done, I don't think it's sh*t at all, don't tell yourself that. Keep writing,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    I loved this poem so much! its so dark and raw! i would normally put my fave bit, but i think it wud b a VERY long comment if i put the hole damnd poem here! and i dont think ur sh*t @ ritin, i love ur style, its always dark and deep and intriguing. well, i think so newaz.

    gr8 work as always, keep goin!!!

    Forsaken Redeemer
    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    I think its good, full of emotion which is what makes a great poem:) thanks for the comment xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    You let that anger out!
    That was pretty good well done.