WOW...that is so sad...and its wonderful, i love it, you are such a talented writer sweetie. I hope all of those hurt feelings aren't that extreme but hunni if they are i know how you feel becauseim going through all of this flippin crap to. Well chika i gotta go. you may email me if you like at lonely_girl_2005@hotmail.com or at trishamrshll@yahoo.com
I will be sure to write you back.

~Hurting Inside~
xxXTrishaXxx

Great poem. strong feelings really effectivly illustrated.

5/5

I think this is perfect as it is

Just my humble opinion

love
XxFeEBeDeExX