Dreams(tanka)

I loved it becasue it was new. I've never heard of this type of potery before [ I know its sad...lol] Great job

Very good, you manage to get the peoce accross very effectivly in the limited number of words, well done on that.

5/5

I like this poem because it is something new and different. I always find it fun to read the poems that actually have a form to them, not insulting the other ones by any means. You have a good message that you are able to make emotional in just a few words, that my friend is talent.

-Tainted Mikochan

That was really cute.. i liked it 5/5

do you think sometime you can check out Tragedy took Over..it means aot to me

thanks for sharing
take care
shannon