Comments : Release me

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Loved the flow and of course the fact of "hope" at the end.

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    "I may break
    but
    will not remain
    broken
    Undaunted
    I will rise above."

    That's the way to go baby, you show him that you are better than that! You pick up your heart baby and stay strong! Great poem!

    -Tainted Mikochan