This is the Poem i wrote and i just got into this Place so yeah that is my poem and i think it is pretty goos to start off with.

Is this the first you wrote?? its good although you should find a different layout when writing...dont try to put them in paragraphs as much..but very good

Thnx for the comment! i really appreciate it! keep writing poems...id like to read sum more bc i think u have poential...