2nd to last stanza is supposed to say together. not tgether. sorry about the typo...thanks 4 readin my poem, hope ya liked it....comments = love

Defanetly By far the best one i have ever read of yours...EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT
5/5
~The Poet~

This is really good, and creativly written by using 3 lines in a stanza. Great job, and you can edit out the typo if you want.

I LOVED it! i could totally relate to everything! it was awesoem! i love all your poems!!:)

p.s. cheack some of mine out sometime! thanks!!