You never cared

by David Marshall   Feb 10, 2006


You make me cry,
yet you say you love me.
Why did you lie,
you faked it obviously.

You never cared,
as my life was getting rougher.
The love you never shared,
leaving me to suffer.

I'm sitting here alone,
with my feelings I mask.
When sorrow was shown,
you never cared to ask.

So I wait for my fate,
with my last breath.
You were just bait,
to wards my near death.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Oops, i commented by accident. lol. anywayz, as i was saying. This poem rhymes fantastically, and the meaning is clear. it didn't make me think much but whether taht is good or not is a matter of opinion. Keep writng and rock on.

    Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    *You are a winner*

    Congrats, you came second in my comp so u are entitled to 4 comments adn 4 votes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Amazing poem...i like it a lot...
    5/5
    lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    It was good. i like it. keep it up
    Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by no

    HEY!! Ya, this is definately my favorite one. I love all of your poems though. They're all so wonderful and beautifully written. They flow really well. But ofcourse this is only a 13 year old's opinion.

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