My first poem

by MrPessimist   Feb 11, 2006


This is my first poem and i hate it already

the incompetence of this poem brings a pain to my belly

to wast your time reading this poem makes you look silly

i can't help my pessimism, I live in Philly

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  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    Lol thanks for all the comments. the haiku is finished. a haiku is a traditional japanese poem having 3 unrhymed lines with 5,7,5 syllables.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Interesting..
    :]

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