Comments : My last poem

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    C'mon..Don't give up lol.
    :]

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    I hope this isnt really ur last poem. keep it up and u'll be great!
    ~Sami

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    The last line of that poem meant that i was trying to be happy and thought i could accomplish it by cutting myself. which failed, by the way. and that cant be your last poem! you gotta keep writing!!
    ~Sami

  • 18 years ago

    by fRAnk A

    Your poems r kickass because they dont make sense... keep doing it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    If you gave up...you'd only be giving up on yourself. Don't let someone (directly or indirectly) be the reason you quit. Keep writing...if you love it....do it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Layna*~

    Hey. I liked it. Short sweet and to the point. It seems like you are really...determined. I think that u should keep writing. Who knos what itll bring right. GOOD LUCK!

  • 18 years ago

    by MrPessimist

    OK. You've all convinced me, I continue writing. Thank you :)