by Samantha Feb 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I tried so hard for u to like me |
Hey that was very good! im sorry that happend to you but hey your not the only one! happend to me too! look at some of mine too! |
by Gabby
Hello just wanted to say that i really like this poem and i think you've done a great job! Keep it up! |
by molly
Hi, great poem! |
by Carmen
That was so amazing. im guessing you moved away from this guy, perhaps? i dunno, but i do know this was awesome. the last stanza, the 'fame' seemed somewhat forced to rhyme with name... i think you should find a new word for that. otherwise, awesome 5/5 |