That was so amazing. im guessing you moved away from this guy, perhaps? i dunno, but i do know this was awesome. the last stanza, the 'fame' seemed somewhat forced to rhyme with name... i think you should find a new word for that. otherwise, awesome 5/5

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Hi, great poem!
i agree with the "fame" thing, doesn't really match the rest of the poem, unless it really has a purpose of being there, i'd agree, it needs changing. but other than that, i really like it! keep writing more, i will be happy to rate them for you!!

Hello just wanted to say that i really like this poem and i think you've done a great job! Keep it up!
and...it reminds me of wat i went thru, too.
5/5

Hey that was very good! im sorry that happend to you but hey your not the only one! happend to me too! look at some of mine too!
aLi*