Comments : Little Fire

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Wonderful poem jacklyn! Good to see you writing again, you wrote this really well good work!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I like it. Beautiful job! keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Short but lovely and very sweet. Keep up the good work.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very nice. I really like the second stanza, beautiful imagery.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A lovely write....great job.

    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    Yay, I like this poem, you rock my socks! your imagery is super good, i wish i could write like that. 5/5 most definitly, *Kaitlyn*