Gray

by daniel   Feb 11, 2006


Gray
the place you go
when you want to escape
Gray
the neutral zone
between war and peace
Gray
isn't my favorite color
but it's where I am
I'll see you there
don't know when
don't know how but
I'll see you there

Gray
Between war
and peace
not quite bad
not quite good

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    I loved this one too! keep writing, youre awesome. and this is so true, gray really isnt anything, its just... neutral.

    ANOTHER perfect 5/5
    -Allanah

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Yeah, nice wordplay. i didnt have to try to understand any of it, i just did. i liked it fives on this side
    keep keeping on......

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Gray
    isn't my favorite color
    but it's where I am''-

    I like it. Cool lines.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely written. Hope your world will have more colors...

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