Comments : Intricate Life

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    That was very powerful and amazing. i loved it, please continue writting,5/5

    thanks for sharing
    take care
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I love the vocabulary you used. It's an amazing poem and the flow is wonderful. Keep writing and take care.

    With love,

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