This is an awesome poem!! WOW! Very well written...Keep up the good work

Hi there,
Thanks for your reply on the discussion forum to my thread.

I would like to use your poetry on my website at www.whitedovesnest.com. You can email me at whitedovesnest@hotmail.com. I think your poetry is fantastic, full of feeling and would be proud to show it on my site.

Thanks
WDNest.

Girl like i said, you got the talent i always tryu to write some poems about life,,, but it never works,, and well u are a good writter, and all your poems has feelings in them,,, they are heart felt and all,,,

Keep it up!

It was a great poem, It might be cause I am slow or stupid, but the Ending threw me off just alittle, but I don't care still gave it a five. :)

Woh I so love the last stanza:
Tension is crazy,
The voice breaks free,
My mouth,
Controlled.
No sympathy.
A will so strong,
It shattered all,
That in it's way,
Happened to fall.

It makes the poem so great! I thought the rhyme in the rest of it was a bit random though and could do with some work.

The flow was not really there, some stanzas long some short.........It makes it harder to read and keep a long with the poem.......The words also seemed a little forced, of course that would be the flow!!

Good job,
-AnnMarie