OMGOSH!! 10/5 that was AWESOME!! wow your a really great writter i'm adding you to my favorites!! keep up the work!! i love this poem! you should make it longer when i got done i wanted to read more!!! great work!! comment baak i would love to know what you think of my work!!

I absolutly love this poem!! its amazing!!

Wow i really like it!! its very good!! nice work!! keep writing! i know whats its like i can relate to this poem!!

In the beggining is the same way i feel about my bf now....and the last part is the same too.,.....its great!!! keep it up 5/5
XOx Laura Marie aka Sweets

Another lovely love poem about the way it should be, and about they way it should feel for both of you.

Very sweet.