*Please Comment this poem*
(Sorry It's more like a story)
I met this girl today...she seemed so sad and when I sat and looked at her the tale of her life seem to be playing out on her skin...as I looked at her her eyes didn't follow my actions nor did she care of what i thought about her. She seemed dead, sorta broken on the inside, made of glass that shattered and is being held by only her skin...on her wrist you can see places in which the glass seems to push out of her like a finger through a balloon. Her skin although tanned and baby soft seems to be screaming for someones touch. she also has beautiful hair, tinted red and brown.She could be beautiful if she tied her knotted tangled hair out of her face rather then let it hang low past her china doll cheeks. As she begins to notice my stare she trys to talk but no words any human can understand come out and seem to shake and die off as soon as they leave her pink chapped lips, and then I see it, her eyes glare at me and tell her story as if I was her, relieving it page by page chapter by chapter...I see her smile, the most gorgeous thing on earth. Her eyes so bright and wide eyed she seems to be so happy and carefree nothing like the girl I saw sitting infornt of my today. She walks with bounce in her steep as if to say nothing could get her down and beside her was her best friend and her sister both equal in beauty that way surpassed her own. Her laugh was like angels singing and smile seemed to brighten up her day. Then I came to a bright that must be important cause she was dressed in her favorite pants and her green shirt. He friends knew it to they too dressed up or something not casual but no fancy either it was just a little more then normal. Then I place came to view it was a roller skating rink and there were many people around. They all entered with their hands knotted around each other so happy I envied this girl that doesn't seem to be. She skated so gracefully and so beautifully she seemed to be gliding on air. Then she stepped out of plain sight and stared blankly at a boy who to her seemed like a god, with no flaws and not defects. I could tell this must have been the one who broke her heart and left her like she was today but there must have been more to it cause I saw them skate off with their hands enter locked within one another's she was the happiest I had ever saw her she seemed to light up everyones day and shine like a star and then a bright light that led me to a park...not a big one all it had was the jungle gym and 6 swings 2 of which where baby swings. I look around to see them siting on the swings staring at each other almost in trace but just the same happy. As I stood I saw many days seem to flash by all with him and her holding hands holding each other until it came to a day in which the sun had just set and the stars had come out, and it looks as if the sky had been set on fire and then smothered out. I saw him on the jungle gym lying down and looking at her deeply almost to say I love you. then words so hollow were spoken.."I'm moving...fare away and I don't think I will be able to see you...and I will miss you so...."and then the scene seem to fade and die out just to come back to a rainy day...the calender on the wall read September 2003. Four months after the day I just witnessed, but this time I couldn't find any happiness or her or him. Then I turned around, and there she was..so sad but not as sad as I see her everyday...something More must have happened, but how much more can someone who just lost their only love get..? she was still happy...but her hope seemed to be dying and her smile so smothered but her tears. I watched as 2 months went by...day after day the same things, the same unhappiness that seemed to haunt her soul and the same ways that her friends tryed to cheer her up winning her back some moments of happiness but still leaving her slowly dieing.
