Omg that was such a good poem!
you explained the situation so well and captured the moment.
reeeally really well done!! 5/5*

OMG! i love your poem.. it basicly says kinda how i feel after what my Ex BF did to me..
just wanted to tell you that i love it cya Ris

This poem is adorable. I love it.

Aww...so much emotion! great job. i love it so much.

*A forbidden tear that I let fall
Holding back I felt it all
I tried to stay strong in front of your eyes
Because this smile holds nothing but lies
I'm dying inside and it's because of you*
i feel this way now....i try to stay strong in front of my ex but i cant do it and now he thinks that this break up isnt hard on me kuz he saw me laughin once....oh well...great poem i loved it...

~!Sandra!~

Hey thanx for the comment..i just read a few of your peoms..there really good! keep it up :)
luv natz x0x

This is so amazingly written.....if i wasnt so upbeat right now i probably woulda cried my eyes out...great jobb hunn keep it up and i LVOE ur name so gorgeous.

LISSA

Thats a very good poem..I write just like you sad, and all depressed and some about my love life, you have a great talent..I havn't been writtin long either..I had this site before but all my poems left..so I have more now..tell me what you think..

Nick

OK so I'm extremely happy to know that someone feels the same way I do. If these poems are true, I SO know how you feel right now. Good lord it's crazy. Hahaha. Good poems! I enjoyed them!

Hey good poem 5/5 i love the title because sometimes you try so hard to hold your tears back and then all of a sudden they all come out. keep up the good work

Love it. Sad but it was full of emotions. Keep on writiing like I said before and I cant wait to read more.

Nice

You are a great poet and this is one of my faves. Great work.

This poem was very strong! A bit short, but still very very impressive!

Yeah, guys suck eh? sounded good. good job.

Wow i have read most of your poems and you are like amazing at poetry!!

Guys can be jerks even if i say it, but that's only because god created us to be like that :) and there will always be another boy :) nice poem :) really nice :) deserves a 5/5 :)

~StefQ