Bleeding

by amandaa   Feb 12, 2006


I'm just your bleeding angel
With blood stains
From my shattered my wings.
Distressed, frustrated, torn apart,
by all the pain life brings.
I'm just another broken heart
Trying to find the smile
That's hiding underneath these tears.
Hiding and lying
For so many years.
I'm just a worthless NOTHING
Don't lie and say I'm not
I'm ungrateful, selfish, greedy
Wanting what I haven't got...
Happiness.
I'm a pathetic piece of ugliness
Once upon a time, tho, I was beauty.
But I can't remember those days
Because now
I'm just covered in blood.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I don't know if I already have but Im adding you to my favs

    I like 'infinite' the best, although this was also quite good, especially since I'm not into the non-rhyming poems.

    great job and keep it up
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by Suicidal_Bleeder

    This is a great poem! I love it! I can relate to feeling that way.. it's just undescribable really..
    Thankyou for the comments you left.. And for the encouragement.. It means so much to me *hugs*
    Take care sweetie..
    ~Ash~

  • Amazing poem, and from what you commented on my poem, Yes i was the girl, and thanks for the lovely comment you left. I love this poem, Its amazingly written! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Pretty good poem...i really liked the rhyming scheme...it was different from others...good work

    --S-S--

  • "I'm a pathetic piece of ugliness
    Once upon a time, tho, I was beauty.
    But I can't remember those days
    Because now
    I'm just covered in blood. "

    awesome. i so know what its like to feel this.
    tanks for the comment. means a ton.
    love your work by the way.

    ashes eternally