Comments : Bleeding

  • "I'm a pathetic piece of ugliness
    Once upon a time, tho, I was beauty.
    But I can't remember those days
    Because now
    I'm just covered in blood. "

    awesome. i so know what its like to feel this.
    tanks for the comment. means a ton.
    love your work by the way.

    ashes eternally

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Pretty good poem...i really liked the rhyming scheme...it was different from others...good work

    --S-S--

  • Amazing poem, and from what you commented on my poem, Yes i was the girl, and thanks for the lovely comment you left. I love this poem, Its amazingly written! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Suicidal_Bleeder

    This is a great poem! I love it! I can relate to feeling that way.. it's just undescribable really..
    Thankyou for the comments you left.. And for the encouragement.. It means so much to me *hugs*
    Take care sweetie..
    ~Ash~

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I don't know if I already have but Im adding you to my favs

    I like 'infinite' the best, although this was also quite good, especially since I'm not into the non-rhyming poems.

    great job and keep it up
    ~Em