by VioletRaven Feb 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Ana (Queen Perfection) |
by Ixora
I didnt mind the length at all as the story held my attention throughout. There is strength and beauty in your words and the structure is created to make an easy flow. Great job! |
Thanks for your comments! |
by N M Lambert
What a great poem, i've read a few of your poems and this one stuck out the most. such great meaning and very well written. not surprised it's a strong 5. keep it up huni. xx |
by Avellana
I'm the same, and this poem seems much more than just a 'venting' poem. |
by Aussie
WOw... cool poem...u got a awesome rythme going on. keep writing |