Quality poem...doesn't flow too easily in places, but that doesn't mean this isnt one of the best poems i've read for a while. well done.

I rly lokied that poem. its veryy kool. i can relate. i named my other personality valerie oddly enough. and i love paris hilton. lol. keep up the good work.
love lots,
sore

Hey i like this poem, yet again very unique....keep up the work hun...xoxoxox

Highly original! I really liked the line
'she is so divine' it really elevates her status and this is done furthermore when you state 'i don't feel complete.' Awesome work.

OMFG
i so know how this feals.
i really want to send you a private message, but i cant, so, well, if you want to contact me you can by my profile or whatev you call it
neways, i really liked this poem, and sometimes, i cant help but feel that i relate.
eternally,
ashes

Marsha, Marsha, Marsha, lol.