Really good poem...all in all i loved it...but "the razor blade, the razor blade" kinda pissed me off being repeated over and over again...but i guess it was kinda necessary...great poem |
Wow, i can relate. in fact...i just cut about 15 minutes ago about 4 times. really pissed myself off too. i'm trying to stop, so i can't believe i did it. anyways, excellent poem. i'm giving you a 5. |