This is an incredible poem...but if i could suggest something....instead of writing it in a paragraph form, put them in stanzas...if you look at my poems you will know what i mean...

~!Sandra!~

I liked this the rhyming was pretty good. My fav line was
Your kind words and actions bring tears to my eyes. The rose you brought me today, caught me by surprise.

It just made me wanna go awwwww lol