Comments : Untilted

  • Thnx, nah it not real, I made it up for english

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Excellent poem.... 5/5! wonderful! keep up the great work.

    i hope you and paul have a great relationship...

    take care.

    michelle

  • Thanks, but its nor true its all made up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Awesome the way it was written i thought it was true! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Excellent poem girl...I loved every word and I couldnt take my eyes off the screen.....5/5...Joc

  • 18 years ago

    by Danai

    I've read many of ur poems... they're all just excellent! 5/5, it goes out of itself... what else is there 2 say... welcome 2 my favourites! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    For an english class poem, this was pretty good. it kind of jumped from different things...im not sure if it was good or bad, but yea... still, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by [a.i.n.s.l.e.y]

    Wow
    thats really good :)
    i luv it hehe

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    This is very very sad
    i have to admit its worded
    by a very very talented and
    i dont know but good
    but sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Sggrbcfrhdmyjccnaffri!!!!

    ^^^
    Thats my reaction to this Poem. It's So Great that trying to describe it's true impact would be like trying to describe how water tastes.
    IMPOSSIBLE!
    The ending mad me cry though. It was so great. So powerful.
    You're talented. Keep Writing.
    5/5
    -Ally