I can really feel the passion in your poems no joke. This one especially.You write with such feeling. i like your love poems.Keep it up and always Remember the beatles "All you need is love" lol thanx for the kind words i really do appreciate it.

I liked the last bit best its almost like a song ending

Loved it, and again related to it. It is like you cannot imagine life without this person no matter what they do, you just want so much for them to love you and you cannot give up until they love you as much back.

I really like poems I can relate to and so many of yours are so short that I wish they were longer to read more, and then I wish it was me who wrote them because they fit with me so well.