~~Leave~~

by Ashlynn   Feb 13, 2006


Please...
Just let me be...
When grief is settled...
We all watch as she runs....
Into the light...
The light of not heaven...
But to hell...

We circle around and watch...
Moaning in sadness...
Crying the tears that she shed...
The heavy metal of the time....
Beats out of the speakers..
All she said to me...
Is please...
To let her die...

She has no friends...
She had to time to follow the trend...
So she will set her own...
The trend that she holds the knife...
And cries..

The soul that was once inside of her...
Cries...
Cries tears of black blood...
She is dead...
She told us all to just...
Leave..

**Sorry guys I just thought of this poem. Review and tell me what you all think**

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I agree.. not sure where the comments/votes are for this one.. I found it really interesting.. I got a bit lost, with all the dots lol, but it just seemed that each line could be taken upon their own merits, or as a continuation of the last. Really really fantastic poem, hunny. Well done. 5/5. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Hey, great poem! I can't believe no one commented yet, it definately deserves more recognition than this. I thought it was very well written and deep. Keep up your good work!

    [ xxx Thank you for your comment on my poem xxx ]

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