Hey, great poem! I can't believe no one commented yet, it definately deserves more recognition than this. I thought it was very well written and deep. Keep up your good work!

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I agree.. not sure where the comments/votes are for this one.. I found it really interesting.. I got a bit lost, with all the dots lol, but it just seemed that each line could be taken upon their own merits, or as a continuation of the last. Really really fantastic poem, hunny. Well done. 5/5. xx