by cLumsy Feb 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Inspired by The Little Mermaid, although it is twisted to the darker side... |
Hey, this one nice.. i like it alot.. i like the way you linked the stanzas.. keep your good job :) |
by *Brie*
Great Poem...there is no way to explain the feeling that I got when reading some of your words it actually made it feel as if you were the mermaid like you knew what to feel in this poem. Very Well written 5/5 good job I hope you will be reading some of my stuff :) as I will be reading more of yours!!!* |
by Natalie
Wow this poem is awesome |
by Amanda
Cool! |
by CoxfaceTM
Omg that is soooooooo good....i love it....if i had more...it would be like 5 thumbs up |