Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me. and amazing job on 'the little mermaid' kind of poem. it was great! ... i loved that show when i was little, and just getting reminded of it, makes me happy :) child hood memories are the best, thanks for reminding me!

Hey darl a t0uching piece beautifully written. great use 0f w0rds. very well written. keep up the amazing w0rk and thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me!

l0ve always d0ra

My god this is amazing, endlessrapture was correct with the comment, your words are absolutely breathtaking, theyre so unique and amazing wow hun, you are such a precious poet dont ever stop writing. xxoo

Wow very good... liked it alot cant wait for the next part, well I know the story but u said a darker side, so now u got me wondering.... good job!!! lolz

::MELI::

Ur poem is awesome!! It's such an inspiration!!

Wow.......enough said jsut keep up teh gorgous workl!! :) PLEASE READ AS MANY OF MY STUFF S YOU CAN....Thnxs

LISSA

Thats a real good poem with lots of meaning to it...well done

Wow this is a great poem. endless rapture is right u have a great way with words. can u twell me when u have the second part of this written? thanx. take care.

Keep up the good work 5/5

Wow that was good! I love that movie!!!

CK

Omg that is soooooooo good....i love it....if i had more...it would be like 5 thumbs up

Cool!

Wow this poem is awesome
its so powerful
i hope i can be just as good
one day!!

Great Poem...there is no way to explain the feeling that I got when reading some of your words it actually made it feel as if you were the mermaid like you knew what to feel in this poem. Very Well written 5/5 good job I hope you will be reading some of my stuff :) as I will be reading more of yours!!!*

*Brie

Hey, this one nice.. i like it alot.. i like the way you linked the stanzas.. keep your good job :)