This poem is a healing poem, which I like to read from time to time. It is good to know that people can move on from a painful past, however it is good to not forget, good to remember, though it hurts. Memories hurt, and alter you for life, but some of the greatest changes are brought to pass in a person's life when they live through something hard. I am glad your dad and you are on better terms, though as your poem said it is a bitter sweet joy because there were bad terms to begin with. A very heart felt poem. Huggles hunni! |
by Stephy
Excellent! good poem!-xxx- |
by Amanda
Awww sabrina, so sad hun. I hope that you are ok. I'm very depressed at the moment so not really reading many poems but I have to find out if you are alright. Luv u hun xxxx |
Great peice very well written. great to see a poem with an element of hope at the end of it. |
by Hayley
This is really good, its deep and jus by reading it i can feel so much emotion r you okay? if u ever need to talk just email me and i'll listen ! its great reading your poems! keep writing ! hugs-hayley |
by Nee
Gr8 one |
by Tanya Miller
Your poem can touch every reader in some way or another. I think most would agree that either we personally have been through something like this and/or know someone who has AND has survived/recovered.Finding your strength in writing. Not only heals but helps other learn and grow. Well written.Kudos dear. |
by Ali
Another one of the best poems i have ever read! It was very meaningful, and in depth good work! |
by Helga Ross
Amazing poetry! |
by Juls
Great work. It takes alot to forgive the past and make things right with parents. Keep strong and you will succed in life as far as you can push your too. Like I said before...keep writing. |
by jello
This is good! |
by Torn
Wow can definately relate..although it seems like im the yyounger version of u and am still in these long teenage years, i feel like it will never end. I'd love to hear from u and how u forgave/moved on from it all..because i feel like i cant take anymore. |
by Emma
This is sad. but excellent. |
by J.C.
That's a beautiful ending. |