by Bradley Peter Feb 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Sweeping through the jungle |
by Lucifer
You have described the imaginary so well. |
by WintersAngel
This poem is amazing!! |
by BlueJay
God, I used to love reading pieces like this, I did not realize how much I missed these sort of pieces. I love the description and the story. I love the word choice and how the length wasn't as horrible as it seems just by looking at it. Nice piece. Good job. I like it |
I love this, the end was my favorit becaise i feel like the mermaid and how the others just wanted her beauty and not her love amazing i could relate so much |
by Jessica
OH MY GOSH! I LOVED this! I love mermaids, haha. amazing flow, great story and description. only thing i noticed was, |