This was so cool! I luved it!!!

I like that, I really do. I like the little tale behind it. Interesting write. And you did great with the flow! =D

Very very good. it has great detail and awesome feeling. its impossible to pick a favorite stanza. wee done!

I liked this poem a lot. I liked how it flowed and the story that was behind it. keep it up

WOW that was a really really good poem i enjoyed reading it

*~*Jen*~*

Wow i have no words! That poem is amazing - totally loved it. Such a great story. Definately without any doubt 5/5.

Kelly
xx

Wow i have no words! That poem is amazing - totally loved it. Such a great story. Definately without any doubt 5/5.

Kelly
xx

It helps that i love all things mythical,
but this poem is very beautiful.
the picture it paints is just amazing!!!
have a look at my stuff!
(kat-x-)
not much yet as i've just joined but
i really love poetry so there will be more 2 come!!!.....

Nice job. Great imagery and unique story. 5/5

This was very good. At the end I wanted it to continue. Wonderful job!

Lol it kinda reminds me of the little mermaid on disney channel except it's from the humans perspective first lol. Awesome job. 5/5
-vino

OH MY GOSH! I LOVED this! I love mermaids, haha. amazing flow, great story and description. only thing i noticed was,

"realized he's stupid mistake"
is "he's" supposed to be "his"?

i'm adding this to my favorites! 5/5

I love this, the end was my favorit becaise i feel like the mermaid and how the others just wanted her beauty and not her love amazing i could relate so much

God, I used to love reading pieces like this, I did not realize how much I missed these sort of pieces. I love the description and the story. I love the word choice and how the length wasn't as horrible as it seems just by looking at it. Nice piece. Good job. I like it

Love,
Adreamer

This poem is amazing!!

You have described the imaginary so well.
It sounded so real like one for once I felt I was watching a short movie, like it was happening infront of me.
I wish for once in life I get a chance to see a mermaid.