The Rainbow

I love the imagery in this peom
your words flowed so well together
i enjoyed reading this poem

Lovely poem, the imagery is really vivid and I thought your choice of words was excellent, they are different and effective. Normally I do not like rhyming poems but the rhyming in this was done really nicely and didn't come off as forced, rather it added to the flow of the piece. Very enjoyable :)

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Hey a great p0em very ell written great use 0f w0rds. thank u s0 much f0r ur kind w0rds 0n my p0ems - they mean al0t t0 me!!

l0ve always d0ra

Hey this is so good, very nice... I like it alot. You did good.. just thought u should kno... and hey thanx for ur comments , they mean alot to me. Gr8 to have friends like you.. ur really talented... and I enjoyed reading this poem... very well written

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