Aww thats so sweet...

Your first stanza....well what to say..thats for sure...its not you at all...this is not how you write...this is me...completely me.
though my name hasn't been mentioned..so u can flirt around with this poem... lol!!
but i know for whom it is..though u hv started playing around with my mind now, i straight away read the last line and this there was no name mentioned..lol

hey great poem once again yaar..what else to say..u r just so amazing and u write so touchy poems

The clock is ticking again
For an eternity time stood still
This soul has been dead for so long
With no will to live

this is me overpowering u...lol

all the best and take care

Very nice beginning but then the flow began to change slightly. Not sure how but it seems like it did. Overall it was okay.
~Unforgiven

Omg wow my favourite part was:
I never had a friendship
That is so very true
A friendship that in my heart
Will last a lifetime through

I was just a body without a soul
Who had no reason to survive
With the magic of your true friendship
You brought me back to life

its my favourite bit cos i have a friend who's just like that and if its ok with you i'd like to send it in an email to my friend - obviously i wouldnt take the credit i'll just say i came across it on a poetry website anyways great writing and keep it up 5/5 =)

This is a very inspiring poem. I hope things work out for you in this friendship.

god bless